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Incredible! Inspiring work, I really love the collection of instruments used in this.
Thanks for the nice comment!
Oh, this is begging for some vocals. Love it!
Nice! Some of the mix is off imo, but the composition is a vibe and I dig the sound of the vox. Not sure I like the metering of the lyrics personally, but it works!
that's totally fair, i still have a lot to learn mixing wise but i'm getting better haha, thank you for listening and for the feedback!
damn what a bop, a real treat for the ears.
Heyyy, good luck in the contest Kysertron
One of the arp chords don't sit right with me. Would have liked to see a bit more development in the progression personally and it feels a little slow. Changing up the chords for a section or 2 and introducing some bpm shifts would have worked fantastically in this song!
Very light and bright, gives me some bad feels but replaces them with a more hopeful feeling shortly after. Reminds me very much of the vibe of Little Inferno's music, getting almost a twisted happy feeling.
This is insane for a round 1 submission, I agree with @chiptami what you did here was just too unfair for the other contestants, shame on you.
Your music is very inspiring to me! I think it is very good!
Wow thank you
It's good you are featuring smaller artists to help them out.
I know, right ? I'm sure this fellow has a future in music, probably in gospel or something
Lyrics: Unoriginal tbh, but that's not my specialty I won't spend too long on it, it's just tiring to hear another rap song about having/making money. I get that money is a big deal and people rap about their life, but it's been decades of basically just this subject. The flow is good tho.
Mix/Master: Balanced well, good job on that but really quiet, ig you were trying to hit a low LUFS target or something? It sounds clean but a little dry. Sounds like your featured artist is using a lower quality mic and it's a bit jarring. Good job on the vocal doubling, nicely done. The ad libs are nice too, they are noticeable but don't detract from the main vox.
Composition: It's just the same ~12 second loop over and over and over. You mute a few elements during the verse and bring them back in the chorus. Evolve the melody a little bit, change up the progression, do a breakdown, do something different for the chorus. I should be able to tell where in the song I am at from something other than the time. The ending is disappointing, it just cuts off abruptly in the middle of a line no less :p
I hope this honest critique finds you well.
Response: Yeah, I guess you can't always argue with what is popular, so I can't fault you too much on that end, artistically tho, you can do better! I'll definitely try to remember to check out if you make a newer release.
I appreciate your critique! Yeah, it's an old track that I just decided to put up on Newgrounds. A friend of mine has the master and I plan on remixing it, just for fun. As for the ending, it wasn't supposed to end that way, something happened with the copy that I have. I've gotten a lot better at mixing, so all the new stuff is going to sound a whole lot better. As for the featured artist, you're absolutely right, recorded his vocals on a different mic, on a different day. It was all done in fun, honing our skills. Of course, you can tell the song was made for the streets, repetitive beat, you know, the thing! I definitely plan on releasing some new songs here on newgrounds very soon! Again, your critique is highly appreciated, much love!
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Age 29, Transfemme
Music Producer
Central Tennessee
Joined on 11/6/12