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I'd challenge you to try coming up with a chord progression with some quick arps or something with sustain. Then have a lead carry you through. Currently your "chord progression" /is/ your melody, and I'd like to hear something with more depth.

Also try coming up with a longer melody and extend that playtime, utilize some bridges and give your song some definite structure (you do have some breaks which is nice). Right now everything moves by a bit quickly. I really like that bass line you have, it's fun.

Altogether it's not by any means a bad song, it's pleasant to listen to, which is more than what I can say about many people that are new to music production.

hella sick song! Good luck in the jam!

EezySeven responds:

Thanks, man! I want it to be the best it could be for the jam.

very enjoyable and nice chords! gonna need an English version of this haha :) that said your native language is beautiful in this song.

Nice! Interesting mix of genres that works pretty well. Good luck in the competition :)

Preds responds:

Thank you! Yeah that is what I wanted, mix of odd styles and genres mixed together in a very epic dark/raising track!

I wouldn't really call it synthwave, I wouldn't call it bad though. I really like it but you need to work a whole lot more on your mixing. There are a lot of things too quiet or too loud in the mix.

laserk responds:

Yes already working on something :D

this is awesome, I really love the landscape of the intro, when it hits it feels so full and rich. The trumpet is so good here. just not too big of a fan past 3:10 especially during that breakdown that high pitch kills me. The glitching half I feel just did the first half an injustice. But I know that is just a personal preference thing.

larrynachos responds:

yes it certainly is an acquired taste ^^; thanks for the review

Don't sell yourself short! this is a great piece. I normally don't like ambient, but this is something a bit different. It might not have an overt dance-like melody but it has an overarching melody/theme that is just awesome!

Best of luck B0nn0t :)

zybor responds:

Thanks, :) good luck to you too.

Look like I'm gonna bomb this NGADM again. Not a fan of contest, reluctantly enter for exposure. IMO, contest hampers my creativity.

Took inspirations from various artists, mainly Venetian Snares, Hidden Orchestra, Nujabes, Stefan Torto, aMUSiC and Leviathan

I like the dissonance from that drone synth. Not a fan of the instrument that comes in around :50 it's got a wicked vibe. The synth at 1:44 adds in some unpleasant dissonance unfortunately. It is pretty repetitive though, try switching up the beat a bit and add some variety.

Great job on this! You've really improved on consistency and everything flows pretty well

Nice work! Keep improving! :)

Heya! I make music!

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